omg.

wow, that was so good. Not what I was expecting at all. AMAZING.

Im so buying this

"You can show it to your mum". Even though this is trying to sell me something I love it. and that's saying something because I normally hate adverts :)

sick of yoyr sh*t larry

That ending is quite possibly the best i've ever seen

Freaking awesome

sik wan! Seriously, this is pretty cool.

i don't like dogs shittin'

If i was any god on flash i would completely use this, voice acting is GREAT and the story line is full of action! Keep it up.

Lovely

I think it's really nice that you've written a song for a shy girl, she'll definitely love it. Only thing i would say is make it a bit longer and maybe have slightly more variation. Tune's great though. :) x